The Choosing!
The Choosing ceremony happened. Neither Caleb nor Beatrice surprised me with their decisions. Somebody did though, and I will now admit, that Beatrice's mom turned out to be awesome. I think I like her.
Anyways, I don't have too much to say to this chapter. I will say I'm even more critical towards the factions - you are pretty much born into your faction. Sure, you can choose a different one, but everyone will think that you're a traitor.
Also, I actually enjoyed the way this chapter was written. The more simplistic and chaotic writing reflected Beatrice's shocked panic.
// Adeline
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